Hi Jefry,
Can we try one more thing? Could you please take out all of the little lines in the iris that surround the cross? It is just too busy. So in the center of the eye will be only the white cross which should be larger than it is in this sample. Thank you!
We like your design, but is it possible to make PANAMA smaller (with lines on each side) and EYE MINISTRY larger? Also, can you make the cross a little bolder? We don't want the lines in the iris to be bolder... we would like the lines in the iris to be a bit more subtle than they are here.
I submitted several new design proposals, I am open to receiving feedback. Each designer has a limit for submitting new proposals, if you are interested in my design, you can give a rank. So I can keep updating and developing my proposals. Your feedback and ranking really helped develop my proposal in your contest.
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Update proposal #225, let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
Update #220 with Panama bigger
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Jefry
Thanks for feedback, update proposal #217 and #218, with different size of cross inside, let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
Can we try one more thing? Could you please take out all of the little lines in the iris that surround the cross? It is just too busy. So in the center of the eye will be only the white cross which should be larger than it is in this sample. Thank you!
Thanks for feedback, update proposal #162 (Panama smaller, Eye Ministry bigger, also make cross more prominent), let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
I submitted several new design proposals, I am open to receiving feedback. Each designer has a limit for submitting new proposals, if you are interested in my design, you can give a rank. So I can keep updating and developing my proposals. Your feedback and ranking really helped develop my proposal in your contest.
Regards,
Jefry