Palooka Joe'sLogo Design Contest

WINNER!! Thank you so much JhorbisT!!!

This is a midpoint between the two thicknesses

This looks too thin, is there any in between the two thicknesses?

Thank you

The thumb looks perfect but can you reduce the weight a little more on the sides of the glove? Almost there..

Hi mike, actually, this one's my favorite too

here are the changes #71

JhorbisT - I do have one more request..The black outline on the glove (below the sub and above the banner, on the left side and around the thumb) seems heavy compared to the rest. Can the weight be reduced in those two locations? My family voted on this design btw!

thank you,

Mike

Oh wow they look great! I can't decide between #67 and #68!! NO more changes, I promise! I need to ask for a friends and family vote now...

Absolutely incredible work, Thank you JhorbisT!!!

JhorbisT, nice work!! Almost there...can the new trim on the wrist be thinner and/or tapered on both ends? Don't want it to take away attention away from the Palooka banner. And is it possible to also see this arm also on #59?

Ty!!

Mike

This looks amazing! One more thing if you can, is it possible to add an arm (natural/tan colored) that would appear to be an extension of the glove hand? With a tiny bit of red wrist pad w/white trim showing below the banner and the bit of arm above and inside the green oval.
Here's an image to get a visual of the glove/wrist extension:
[IMG]http://i68.tinypic.com/311nlv6.jpg[/IMG]


M

Hahaha that would be really nice, such a pity that i don't live in the united estates

here are the changes #63 #65

Think I'm going to owe you a lot of free steak-n-cheeses after all these changes!

JHorbisT - I'm so close to deciding but wanted to revisit this version one last second..can I see what this would look like if the same bright colors from #60+ were used, the glove was bigger, the inner "spokes" radiated out from the center, The banner had the stretched PALOOKA JOE'S text, and the 6 white stars were added? Basically everything from #61 but the #61 glove holding the steak sub switched out with this one ( but a bigger brighter red glove, with sub the same curve and location, just slightly bigger and brighter, too to match the colors from #61). I do like the way the curve of the top of the sub matches the top curve of the oval.

Thank you very much,

Mike

here the star have the original size but completely white

here the star are 10% bigger

How about the stars as the top layer with all 6 bright white?

i was trying to do the version where the star shine a little but that really don't work principally by their size.

Oh this looks so good. Now that the glove and sub are in the perfect place, can you do one last thing and now lower the PALOOKA JOE'S banner a bit so that it is just above the stars (the two outer ones would be slightly dimmer bc of the banner's drop shadow, or maybe an additional version where they shine through to see what looks better) and the bottom text?

Thank you for all your diligent and great work, I really think this could be it!

Can you go larger still on the glove and sub? Would like to see the top outer edges of the bread expand outside the oval..

Can you enlarge just the glove and sub and keep the oval the same? Also stars look good but can they be a lot smaller, like half that size?

Ty

Mike

here enlarge a 10% more the oval, globe and sub, the difference is subtle, let me know if that percent is okay

Looking really good. Like the position of the glove, but is it possible to enlarge the entire glove and sub by 10-15%? And also add 3 tiny white stars to each side of the "EST. 2017" that curve along the inside the green oval filling that space?

M

Thanl you for the changes, text looks great. Can I see what it would look like if the glove is lowered more behind the PALOOKA JOE'S? So that the top outer edge of the oval can be seen?

M

sorry for the delay, i was having problems with my internet connection yesterday, but here are the changes let me know if you like it

After lowering the glove, is it also possible to not condense the PALOOKA JOE'S as much? Or stretch it to where the "P" and the "S" get closer to the sides of the banner? Still looks as if the PALOOKA JOE'S is a bit too tight.

Thank you, you are still winning right now and I feel these last couple changes could put this design over the top.
Ty

Mike

With the glove still holding the sub

JhorbisT, can I see what this looks like with the glove lowered where the thumb is more centered, too?

Thank you,

M

Can you lower the glove and sub a touch? So the thumb is more centered?

Ok. Instead of holding the sandwich, is it possible to see the glove fist closed with the steak-n-cheese sandwich sitting on top of the glove like the glove is pushing it up? The sandwich would be slighty curved down on the sides. Like the glove is "punching" it up.

Thank you,

M

please, just let me know if you want see any other change

Very nice! One last thing, is it possible to see the black banner outline a thinner weight and add a slight black drop shadow to each of the letters/text PALOOKA JOE'S? Want to see if that would make the text pop more.

Thank you again for all your work JhorbisT, your a great designer and it's super super close!

Mike

I'm glad that you like it :) #8

JhorbisT that looks so much better! You are so close. Love the colors. Couple more things if possible:
1. Can you enlarge the PALOOKA JOE'S banner a bit more and raise it to center It? Is there a way to make the text bolder as well? Want to make it easier to read from far away.
2. After raising it can you add: "est. 2017" in the space created below the banner? Plain white small point is fine, then also
3. Enlarge the "AUTHENTIC STEAKS....etc" still more? So its larger easier to read from a far

Looks great!

Mike

thanks you so much for the feedback i just upload the revisions #7 let me know what you think

GREAT start JhorbisT!! Looks really good but is it possible to:
1. Add realistic colors to the Steak-n-cheese sub (bread=beige/tan, Meat=dk brown/black, cheese=pale yellow - can it be gooey and dripping slightly?)
2. Increase the size/length of the cheesesteak by another 30-40% (but keep it shorter than the size of the "PALOOKA JOE'S" banner)
3. decrease the size of the glove, to about 75%. Looking to give more emphasis on the steak-n-cheese, make that bigger and the glove slightly smaller
4. Increase the size of the PALOOKA JOE'S banner by 15-20% and raise slightly, to allow for more room below the banner
5. Increase in the size of the 'AUTHENTIC STEAKS SUBS & SAUSAGES" text
6. Try a different color for the large oval, like a Dark Green or Navy

Again this is a great start! Thank you