On entry #87 can you pull the name of the school (Palladium Schools) out of the logo and place it below so that the two stand alone? Please use all caps and have the lettering appear metallic / silver.
In the #1 entry the art under the owls head is a little blurry. Could you make that part a little more clear like in entry #89 and also maybe add some pages to the book to make it more clear that it is an open book?
- made more visible the art under the owl's head, which are at the same time rays of light coming as a knowledge form the opened book, and a stylized-abstract owl's wings - open. - Made more pages for the book - Made the color combo green and gold - Made more 3D look
On Entry #97 can you take out the circle inside of the design that goes around the head of the owl and the book? Also, this design seems to have a blend of gold and green mixed together. Can you be sure to separate the gold from the emerald green? Make sure that the two colors stand alone please.
The revision is more vivid, which is what we are looking for. The logo is just a little bit too busy as it is. Can you please experiment with taking some of the elements out of the design to try and minimize the complexity of the design? Let's see what the logo looks like if you take out the outer circle. Please make one with just the inner circle containing the owls face and the open book and take out the rays in the background.
Could you just incorporate the idea a a golden orb glowing up from the book's open pages? Not like the sun you have shining in the background, but just maybe an arc of golden light coming up from the book directly. The golden glow will represent knowledge.