PALAZZO DANIELELogo Design Contest

opened it up a bit. what do you think?

no worries!

Yes it is but I wont be able to get to it until tonight. I have classes all day today

I mean, inside the icon

Hey Sean, do you think it's possible to give a little bit more air inside the graphics?

Sounds good!

Thx! One week to choose now!

Haha dont worry about. I know how important the right design choice is. Its a big deal and I love doing it haha ill get it done right away

Can we put SALENTO PUGLIA on this, instead of the last line? I still find it very interesting and can still be the final choice!
Thank you and sorry for being a pain in the ass!

Glad you like it!

Thx

I agree

Made the icon a bit smaller. felt it was too bulky before

Not a problem

This is very nice!
The rectangle unifies everything.
Can we try to make the rectangle a bit bigger? It needs more air, above all at the top and at the bottom..
Thank you! We're getting there!
more air

Glad you like it!

Better and better. Thank you!

i uploaded a few choices for you

:-)

That is a good point. It wouldbt hurt to have one of each. Ill try a few things

What if we change the last line into: Historic mansion in Puglia ?
Would you prefer it as a foreign potential client?
What it's not said graphically is said in a sentence..
Or it's confusing? What do you think?

I agree! Clients like you are few and far between lol

Not a problem at all. Let me know if there is anything else I can do

Thanks for understanding quickly my mood

I agree! Thx!

Still maintains a modern feel which connects well with younger generations but still holds prestige for the the older ones

I really like it. Its simple and refined. Making the icon thinner made a world of difference. And I am liking the A more and more. It keeps the design classic.

Yeah, definitely more legible, thank you! I like it very much. What's your opinion on this?

Yes please!

Its probably because this one is in black and the other I used a softer grey tone. I can do the other one in black as well

This one is more legible than the one I prefer.
is it because it's darker or because it's thicker?

It is a lighter shade of grey

Best so far, thank you sean!

Is it grey or black? Because it might be a little bit illegible if compared to another which I'm going to comment now

Its my job lol and not a problem

You're spoiling me! LOL
Can we try this with normal A pls?

I'm glad you are happy with the design. As for the cutting edge I can see what you mean and I was thinking about it. I just love the angles because they are solid and stiking features and really and a hint of elegance

Very nice way of playing the diagonal lines with the A of the font.
It might be too cutting edge for an historical building (or maybe not?) but I do like it.

Thank you very much for the timely and helpful comments. I will get to work on the changes soon.

Hi Sean,

Thank you very much for your submission, it's very nice.
I find the image line a bit too thick, such as the weight of PALAZZO.
The font seems a bit too tall, even though I like its simplicity very much.
I would put the motto a bit bigger too.

Thanks and good luck for the tournament!
Francesco

between the two, I prefer the thin one.

Im not very much into the two different font weights