Can we put SALENTO PUGLIA on this, instead of the last line? I still find it very interesting and can still be the final choice!
Thank you and sorry for being a pain in the ass!
This is very nice!
The rectangle unifies everything.
Can we try to make the rectangle a bit bigger? It needs more air, above all at the top and at the bottom..
Thank you! We're getting there!
more air
What if we change the last line into: Historic mansion in Puglia ?
Would you prefer it as a foreign potential client?
What it's not said graphically is said in a sentence..
Or it's confusing? What do you think?
I really like it. Its simple and refined. Making the icon thinner made a world of difference. And I am liking the A more and more. It keeps the design classic.
I'm glad you are happy with the design. As for the cutting edge I can see what you mean and I was thinking about it. I just love the angles because they are solid and stiking features and really and a hint of elegance
Very nice way of playing the diagonal lines with the A of the font.
It might be too cutting edge for an historical building (or maybe not?) but I do like it.
Thank you very much for your submission, it's very nice.
I find the image line a bit too thick, such as the weight of PALAZZO.
The font seems a bit too tall, even though I like its simplicity very much.
I would put the motto a bit bigger too.
Thanks and good luck for the tournament!
Francesco
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Thank you and sorry for being a pain in the ass!
The rectangle unifies everything.
Can we try to make the rectangle a bit bigger? It needs more air, above all at the top and at the bottom..
Thank you! We're getting there!
more air
Would you prefer it as a foreign potential client?
What it's not said graphically is said in a sentence..
Or it's confusing? What do you think?
is it because it's darker or because it's thicker?
Is it grey or black? Because it might be a little bit illegible if compared to another which I'm going to comment now
Can we try this with normal A pls?
It might be too cutting edge for an historical building (or maybe not?) but I do like it.
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Thank you very much for your submission, it's very nice.
I find the image line a bit too thick, such as the weight of PALAZZO.
The font seems a bit too tall, even though I like its simplicity very much.
I would put the motto a bit bigger too.
Thanks and good luck for the tournament!
Francesco
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