hehe! no problem, I fixed the problem, when you convert the font to vectors (outline) it looks a bit thicker for this font.
I just add a tiny white stroke to have the same look as before.
Thanks
Luckymac
Now, coming to the core:
I think that we should lower a bit the graphic and PALAZZO DANIELE. As a result, the white strip between the square top side and the graphic top line would be as large as the space between the square sides and the line edges.
Also as a result, there would be less space between PALAZZO DANIELE and SALENTO PUGLIA, becoming this last line a sort of base of PALAZZO DANIELE instead of being alone.
This is very hard to explain, sorry, but it's very easy to do: everything but Salento Puglia goes a few millimetres down! :-)
Hello Francesco
I just noticed that the designer in second place has the lines like that, no complete, I will get in trouble if I do change them, he will say i am coping his idea (it is very nasty here when that happen)
Regards
Luckymac
Hello Francesco
Thanks for your comments! Please let me know if you like the new version, I think you are right about a bit more air around the graphics. About the diagonal line I think it doesn't look good "open" for a front view makes no sense, but it is up to you.
Let me know.
Regards
Luckymac
Cograts, first in the ranking and in the final! :-))
I feel the logo needs a little more white, more air around the icon, maybe we can also reduce a tiny bit the dimension of PALAZZO DANIELE and give more space between the letters.
It is still too full.
Also, but I'm not sure about it, I wonder what would happen it the diagonal line didnt touch the external edge, if it was "open".
Thank for your submission! This is actually very nice!!
Can we work a bit on that?
I wouldnt put the little hanging chandelier (it makes the arcade kinda phallic!!), i would use a simpler font for palazzo daniele (the one you used in the other entry), and i would put "Salento Puglia" instead of "Gagliano del Capo Puglia Italy" in order to reduce it to just one line.
Can the final logo be a square shape instead of a rectangle?
Very very nice..
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No just took out the square around and I adjust the size of the whole logo to the image. it is the same just a bit bigger (scale)
But is the font bigger now?
Just 2 last things:
No square around it and maybe the line under the arches should end where the arches end?
Thanks!
I just add a tiny white stroke to have the same look as before.
Thanks
Luckymac
Soooorry!
No worries! we need to do a perfect logo! sorry about that now it is centred as it should be.
Sorry for being a pain in the ass! :(
I think that we should lower a bit the graphic and PALAZZO DANIELE. As a result, the white strip between the square top side and the graphic top line would be as large as the space between the square sides and the line edges.
Also as a result, there would be less space between PALAZZO DANIELE and SALENTO PUGLIA, becoming this last line a sort of base of PALAZZO DANIELE instead of being alone.
This is very hard to explain, sorry, but it's very easy to do: everything but Salento Puglia goes a few millimetres down! :-)
I just noticed that the designer in second place has the lines like that, no complete, I will get in trouble if I do change them, he will say i am coping his idea (it is very nasty here when that happen)
Regards
Luckymac
I wouldnt mind testing the open diagonals if you can.. Just to be sure.
Thanks for your comments! Please let me know if you like the new version, I think you are right about a bit more air around the graphics. About the diagonal line I think it doesn't look good "open" for a front view makes no sense, but it is up to you.
Let me know.
Regards
Luckymac
I feel the logo needs a little more white, more air around the icon, maybe we can also reduce a tiny bit the dimension of PALAZZO DANIELE and give more space between the letters.
It is still too full.
Also, but I'm not sure about it, I wonder what would happen it the diagonal line didnt touch the external edge, if it was "open".
Thanks
Francesco
Regards
Luckymac
Can we work a bit on that?
I wouldnt put the little hanging chandelier (it makes the arcade kinda phallic!!), i would use a simpler font for palazzo daniele (the one you used in the other entry), and i would put "Salento Puglia" instead of "Gagliano del Capo Puglia Italy" in order to reduce it to just one line.
Can the final logo be a square shape instead of a rectangle?
Very very nice..