Own My Piece of UtahLogo Design Contest

Can you make the "own my piece" font more bold and slide the "of utah" to the right but keep the line to the left?

any update comment for this proposal design?

how about new font proposal?

Thank you for your comments and feedback, I will immediately send a revision.

thank you

I like the elements of this design but I would prefer a rectangular shape. This shape is more triangular in nature. I’d like to see the shape of Utah to the left of the text. Thanks!

Can you add the window detail of this design into the blue design you submitted? I like that detail. It identifies the home with the mountains in the background. Great ideas!

I like your creativity and subtly design elements. The mountain outline and roof line of the home has dual meaning and really captures the state of Utah. I’d like to see a different font. Something with more bold letters and a design that minimizes the word utah. The current font is too stringy for my taste. Thanks!

congratulations on the launch of the Own My Piece of Utah contest
after I read the design brief, then I am interested to participate in this contest, I give some design proposal for your consideration please check, give feedback if you have suggestions so that logo design will be according to what you looking for