These have a lot of potential, could you submit one with a more abstract owl design? something that could be printed as a stand-alone symbol with an emphasis on strong lines and contrast.
thank you so much for your feedback. but i am really sorry before, your contest is on judging mode, and only 1st rank can submit new design revision from your feedback. i'll be happy if i had a chance for making some update design for your contest. please let me know if u have some question for me.