Hi Angela, I like the design element of the V extending into the lower line of test. However, it does seem to effect the readability of Advanced Eye Care. The 'A' already seems a little too close to the 'V'. Would a darker blue be more readable and could you tweak the sizes and positions to make the slogan a bit larger? If it doesn't seem to work, we may need to go with a design that gives the full line to the slogan. Thanks!
Hi Angela, I sent a message this morning, but I don't see it on the comment section. I must not have sent it properly. If you get get a message about 4 hrs ago, this is a repeat. I like the look of the 'V' extending lower as in the most recent revision, but I guess it does cause the slogan to be a little smaller and less readable. Is it possible to do some slight adjusting to increase the readability of the slogan? (It seems that it is a little too close to the V already.) I was also wondering if a dark blue, instead of the light blue would make it stand out a little better. If it doesn't well with this design, we can also go with one like #100, having the full bottom line with the slogan. Could you please show me #100 with a dark blue slogan? I posted a comment that I am no longer accepting new entries, I really like what you've put together.
I've made the revisions you wished. I think that the dark blue is better than the light blue. I enlarged the slogan, made it all caps and italic, because it makes is with different look.
I like it! (#125) It just seems that the spacing of Vision needs a little tweeked. (V-I, very close as compared to the other letters) Please adjust. Thanks!