I do apologize. I've withdraw my design ( number #53 ) has ranked at # 2, because Alexandru has claimed that I've copied his concept in number #24. Thanks for your attention. I promise if you give me a chance by move my design's rank to #1, I will make any update designs to what you look for. Thank you.
i think its just a bit too busy now. when its a web logo it wll appear pretty small so people won't see the detail. i like your other design and can't think how to improve it right now