Your new proposal already in me but does not inspire much enthusiasm. It's the chosen font, difference in height compared to the rest of the initial letters and the dot on the "i".
If possible, I'd probably just as high font (I do not know whether large or small fonts) and font I used little easier.
Hello Mr.Operative, I still hope that you manage to finish the first font logo. It has the most beautiful rendition of the letter "O". But the font next to impossible. All it takes is for me something simple. Can you do it? :-) If so, the Top 5 is certain.
Thank you for editing, It is bigger adjustment than I expected. But it is also very nice. I imagined just a simple font. Element "dots" do not repeat :-) Thank you for your patience!