Othisi TrainingLogo Design Contest

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Yea. What if “TRAINING” was pushed all the way to the right with just one long horizontal line to the left.

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Yea, making the "OTHISI" more of the focal point than the "TRAINING". Also wonder what it would feel like having the insignia to the left of the font rather than on top.

how about this font ?

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I like the direction this one is going. The font is maintaining the luxury feel I'm going for. I like the "training" with the line work on both sides. There is a subliminal feel for pushing forward with the insignia which is the meaning of Othisi. Im wondering what the font would look like maybe a little stretched taller.

Hi, thanks for the rating.
Are there any changes or modifications that you would like to see?
Please ask, I'll do my best for you.

best regards
mashel

what about some of the logos I sent, do you like one?
If you need a change feel free to let me know, I'm ready to work with you.

This is more the direction I’m looking for.

Where I like the simplicity of the font, I really would love for the logo to be separate from the wording.

what do you think , any suggestion ?