Like your fonts...they are fun, frolicky... Even though purple is not one of our colors, I like how it looks with the gold. Still, it's unlikely we'd move away from orange/brown/black combinations.
We like the creativity on the explanation mark, just not sure of the relevance of the spoon for the exclamation mark. What is the relevance? Perhaps more for a restaurant than for a coffeehouse. Maybe something with people in it instead to reflect our mission?
Our tag line..."Changing the world through coffee...one cup at a time"...can you work that in somewhere?
Our name is "Others!" with an "s" on the end. And our mission is helping "Others" through the power of a business, which is principally coffee.
Your work is very professional looking! Would love to see some more examples submitted for Others!