After looking at it again, we like the windows in each of the mountains as it portrays more of a home look. But the font for both of your submissions can you find a font that isn't so tech looking? Something that has the font extending on top of the "I" and "N" Like a pillar? I hope I am explaining this well!
I like the overall design, but the colors are too strong. Mainly the yellow. Also, the "Home is where the heart..." is too much. Makes it look too busy. The window is off over the "I" I am not sure if it is centered with the whole word overall.
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Thanks for feedback, update replace the white roof to white line roof.
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Jefry
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Update with sans serif regular font (not bold)
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Jefry
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Update in sans serif #101 #102 #103 #104
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jefry
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Greetings, update with font like pillar #72 #73 and #74, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update base on entry #29 : #46 and #46 with other color alternative. Also update with new shape of house #47 and #48
Version without slogan : #49 #50 #51 and #52
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Jefry
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I submit new design proposal, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry