Ori ActiveLogo Design Contest

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This is the original flower, I've just smoothed a couple of the petal edges to make it cleaner and added a darker blue on two of the petals. I just wanted you to see the difference. This one is a more natural, hand drawn feel, the other is more abstract and symmetrical.

Okay nevermind - my husband likes this flower better and thinks it will translate better to the clothing :-)

If it's easy to do, can you do one like this (still in black and still this font) and just change out the flower to your old flower? I'm not sure if that one looks more authentic or is easier to put on the clothing as an emblem. I'm a little torn between the 2 flowers and how they will translate to black and white. Still keep the stem and all of that.

Thanks - I think that is better!

You might like this font for 'active' better, it is very similar, and all of the letters are easy to read. Notice how the t and i are connected which gives it a little more character.

Thank you for the feedback! i'll be on stand by if you want me to show you any changes, etc. Have a great day!

I had a performance last night with my dance troup and this one was their favorite. I'm showing the options to my family today. They really like how the cross in the T leads into the flower. One person thought the V in active looked too much like an O, but that's the only comment that was negative and only came from one person who seems to thing that actioe would be a word :-)

I am up and working on design projects. Let me know if you would like to see any little detail changed, font, etc.

I think I liked the other flower better - looked more like a plumeria instead of a pinwheel.

That's an idea

One idea might be to keep the Ori and the flower the same, and change the word 'active' if you have a men's line, more masculine font for active, so that you can just swap them out...just an idea!

You will know when it is right when you see it. It is your brand and you want it to be perfect. It would be nice if I could make the flower so that you could use it for men and women, more gender neutral. I am going to keep working on it!

Actually I really like the flower. I'm just undecided because just in case in the future I decide to do something with mens clothing I think yours might be a little too feminine (even though I realize I put feminine as very important in the questionnaire - I'm second guessing myself)

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I am working on improving the overall flow of the design. It is important that any design you choose works well in black/white. Color is the easiest part and can be selected once you are happy with the layout, etc. I will be here working all day and I plan to experiment with the flower.

Thanks for commenting! I will work on drawing a tropical flower.

I do kind of like this one, but I wish the flower was a little more tropical

Thanks!

Thank you for your comments. I will explore another direction!

I like this one the best out of the 4 because of the colors, but I think it's too hard to read the Ori and I wish it had a little more about fitness, or something - I can't quite put my finger on it. The pedals from the plumeria might look a little weird too if people don't understand what it's supposed to be.