1. Definitely on the right track and like the layout of #226.
2. Can you substitute the black in the emblem with charcoal gray?
3. #230 emblem seems to have a more pronounced light gray border (shading) around it, which I like. Can you make the light gray in #226 just a bid more pronounced?
4. Can you substitute the black in the emblem with charcoal gray?
5. How about adding a SM (service mark) superscript?
6. In a separate example, can you have the red in the "S" continue around the circle (becoming thinner in a subtle manner) and end up behind the black, and the black on the opposite side do the same behind the red?