In regards to all 3 entries: #5,#6 & #7: Great start - thank you! I like that you incorporated the gold with the houses.I also like the way you have placed the words Organized by Design with Organized over Design. I also liked that you incorporated the 3 services and shortened them to Staging, Makeovers and Organizing. The blue color I prefer would be more of a royal blue than the current blue green. I think the checkmark for a dot over organized is clever - a nice touch. Entry #5 - I like that the gold house(s) are divided into 3 - represents the 3 services to me. The gold color seems to go a little brown to me or on my computer - can it go a little more 3 D gold like a shiny gold medal (hope I'm explaining this well) and Staging, Makeovers and Organizing a little more gold - less brown. (not yellow as I think that is hard to read) And I would prefer a more royal blue.
#6: color feedback is the same as for the posting for #5, #6 & #7. Am not sure about the look of the 4 houses in this one but appreciate what you started and would appreciate more ideas regarding ways you could implement the house(s) idea.
#7: Color feedback is the same as for the posting for #5,#6 & #7, The house(s) feedback is the same as for #6. However this logo is different as it has a background color - not the right color - but interesting. So maybe if it had more of a royal blue color with a different house(s).
Wow - these are great designs and moving forward! #11 I like that you drew a loop around Organized by Design - it seems to anchor the text to the houses. I like that Organized and Design are different fonts or different sizes with a little more weight on Design. I also like that you used 2 different blues and maybe I should open the logo up to shades of the royal blue wiht lighter blue. I also like the extra depth you put into the houses. #10 I love the royal blue background - I also love how it has a gradient quality and not flat. I wonder could I see also that royal blue but with that gold outlining like in #11 & #12 #12 - this is another great one - love the loop around the text. Also love that you used gold for the word Design. Am not sure about the green house but maybe another color that works with the gold and blue? #11,#10,#12, #9 - I am also wondering if Design were in a script that may work with the font of Organized as I do like how you have differentiated the 2 words. #14 I'm not quite sure about the houses but appreciate the variety. I do like the shading of the background. Seeing the grey shading I am also wondering although I've been stuck on gold if I should also open up the colors to silver with the blue? I hope the feedback is helpful and I look forward to your next set of designs!
These are great again! #17 has a good color scheme adding the red and grey/silver in. May I also see that one with the royal blue in place of the red and keeping the grey/silver house in the middle? #16 & #15 I think the highlighting going through the text makes it a little harder to read. #9 I still also like with just the blue and gold. Could you add the additional highlighting in the gold roofs as in #11? I like that the emphasis has not been on the word Organized - could we also try a different font for the word organized? Also one with all blue text and one with the word Design in gold?
#10 Is still good. Could we add the highlighting to the roofs as in #16 as well as maybe a different font for the word Design. Thank you so much. I look forward to more ideas from you.
Thank you so much for continuing to change out the fonts and sizes for me to see. #24 I like the highlighting to the gold houses. I appreciate seeing the different font and size for design. While I think on that one, could I see where you have the size and spacing similar to #10 but with a script like or different font for Design?
I think what I'm trying to figure out is the size, spacing and font for Organized by Design. I do like how in #11 (and many others) the word design tucks under organized. I like the font and size of Organized.
#11,#27 I like the gold line around the text and with #27 the dots at the end. A nice touch.
I feel the logos are getting more detailed with the revisions and I like the attention to detail that's being given.
Could I see where the font changes for Design for #24 & #25 but stays in the same proportion, tucking under Organized as #10 & #11 just to compare?
If you have addtional ideas as we work on these please submit. I'm not sure my feedback is always the best. Thank you.
These are very good. I am only giving you small tweaks for these at this point as you have been kind enough to let me see options with the same designs that I like. # 28 & # 29 I like - Maybe a little space after "by" so that "Design" fills in a little more to the right or after where the g from Organized drops down. - Just a little different spacing I'd like to see.
Your designs have been very good. Please feel free to submit any additional ideas you have that different from what we have been working on. Thank you so very much.
Thank you for the changes. I like #42 & #43. #44 & #43 are very interesting also. Could we make that chevron just a touch more like a roof? I like them how they are but also want to see what else we can do with these designs. Love the colors and the windows in each! Could you maybe use the blue to fill from under the roof and behind the text but maybe forming a house behind the text? And if I could see the word "by" smaller in both. These are also great designs with much potential. Thank you so much! I look forward to more from you!
Thank you for letting me some different ideas from #44. I also like that it looks like a door in the original design. Very clever. These were all very good designs #46 Yes I do like the word "by" in the smaller font. #47 I also appreciate seeing the design with a more house like look. #48 I think #48 is easier to read with the roof lines above the text. Re: #42 Could I see a few minor changes for comparison? I like how you have spaced Organized and Design to uniformly line up on the right side. I also like "by" in gold. Keeping the colors the same as they are now could I see Organized in the font shown in #11 & #28 (Capital O, lower case remaining letters) and Design in a font with a different style g. Maybe like in #11 and without the bolding. Your designs have all been excellent. If you have any other ideas for Organized by Design I would welcome any additional submissions you may have. Thank you so much.
Thank you for all of your revisions! Its sometimes hard to explain so I'm not sure I'm always clear so I appreciate your continued efforts! I would like to compare the text and fonts to really perfect for #42. #42 I would like to keep the text color the same. I would like the text for Organized to have a capital "O" as in #11 - but with the same blue color as in #42. Keep the gold swish and "by" in gold also as they currently are. Please keep the word "Design" in same blue color as is in #42 but I would like to see the font as you did in #54. I like the little space after "by" and if Organized and Design can line up on the right side I do like that if possible. Thank you so much and I look forward to this revision.
#47 Could I see the house (where it is currently dark blue) extend to the sides of the roof to make a complete home behind all of the text - You may need to extend the roof line just a little so that the blue is behind all of the letters. And may I see it in the blue you used in #45 (just the lighter blue you used in other designs) Thank you so much.
I would like to compare the text and fonts to really perfect for #42 as it is such a good design that I like. #42 I would like to keep the text color the same. I would like the text for Organized to have a capital "O" as in #11 - but with the same blue color as in #42. Keep the gold swish and "by" in gold also as they currently are. Please keep the word "Design" in same blue color as is in #42 but I would like to see the font as you did in #54. I like the little space after "by" and if Organized and Design can line up on the right side I do like that if possible. Thank you so much and I look forward to this revision.
hi obd im so sorry, yesterday i was ill.. so i cannot continue to working,.. but today i'm ready.. but im on the 3rd ranks so i cannot submit an entries in the judging mode..
I'm so sorry to hear you were ill. I'm glad you are feeling better. I had wondered what happened. You had so many good designs (entry #48 was another one I would have like to work with) and I held the current #3 rank in the #1 spot for a long time but eventually when I wasn't hearing back I had to move on. You are an excellent designer and I thank you very much for at least letting me know what happened.