My intention with this design was to make it memorable while maintaining simplicity. Most successful branding is not overly complicated. The use of black and white is the first choice when trying to visually convey superior quality and since the business utilizes the word "Onyx", it seems like a nice fit. As to the design elements themselves, the 3 towers are intended to represent commercial properties, like city skyscrapers. Their roofs have been slanted to create a pinnacle that represents upward growth and success. the ring represents synergy. Thank you for your feedback! Shoulld you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask..
I have extended the design period for until Friday. If possible, please submit another design which is different from what has already been submitted. We are looking for variation before deciding a winner. Most submitted designs are too close a variant of another and want to see variety before selecting.
Here is my latest concept. I utilized a traditional cube shape which abstractly represents the commercial structure aspect. I decided to mak the front walls slightly transparent so that you could see into the structure. Transparency in business is important from a consumer perspective. The design has been rotated to make a hexagonal representation of the "O" in Onyx. The colors are a departure from my previous entries and seem to provide the design the depth I wanted to achieve. I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks for the extended opportunity.