I like where this is headed. Could I see something very similar to this but with a more masculine font and a darker blue? I'd also like to see a normal 'i' and 's' in place of what they currently are.
Thank you for your revisions. Now though, I think it's gotten too simple. Sorry about that. If you have any other suggestions or ideas please submit more. I'd like to see something with a nice professional crisp look maybe with a dark royal blue and no red.