Hey there,
great job but i'm sure that you could do it better. Here is our new directives, remarks and propositions:
1) the escutcheon that you try one all your logo with the "1P" is a pretty good idea but we didn't like the escutcheon (shield).
2) Our service will be parking via a mobile application. Our idea is to put a P inside a square to express mobile application idea for the pictogram:
3) A square like a mobile application for the pictogram.
http://www.google.fr/imgres?q=mobile+application&um=1&hl=en&sa=N&tbo=d&biw=1314&bih=692&tbm=isch&tbnid=J-xRfK2OV-uN9M:&imgrefurl=http://lsvp.com/2012/04/19/how-to-build-the-next-huge-mobile-app/&docid=Qv4Cw8SOuF497M&imgurl=http://lsvp.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/iphone_apps.jpg&w=5333&h=3358&ei=VnT5UJHSF8WWhQePj4DIAw&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=414&sig=115322963564548528364&page=1&tbnh=126&tbnw=200&start=0&ndsp=25&ved=1t:429,r:19,s:0,i:179&tx=99&ty=753) try to make relief/ 3D with it.
4) Try other fonts because we didn't like this one, but keep the O and P in capital.
5) for the colors BE CREATIVE ! but we prefer blue grey/ silver grey / pearl grey
6) Think connectivity/ e-objects/ innovation/ network
Good luck. I let you working on it :)