hey there,
We really like the P idea with the one inside, great idea. This is our directive:
Hey there,
You made a very good job but we actually want to see more to select you for the second round. Your variations for the "P" or the "O" are succeed. Here is our remarks and propositions:
1) Our service will be parking via a mobile application. Our idea is to put a P inside a square to express mobile application idea for the pictogram. So you could try to put your "P" with the "1" inside in a square.
2) A square like a mobile application for the pictogram.
http://www.google.fr/imgres?q=mobile+application&um=1&hl=en&sa=N&tbo=d&biw=1314&bih=692&tbm=isch&tbnid=J-xRfK2OV-uN9M:&imgrefurl=http://lsvp.com/2012/04/19/how-to-build-the-next-huge-mobile-app/&docid=Qv4Cw8SOuF497M&imgurl=http://lsvp.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/iphone_apps.jpg&w=5333&h=3358&ei=VnT5UJHSF8WWhQePj4DIAw&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=414&sig=115322963564548528364&page=1&tbnh=126&tbnw=200&start=0&ndsp=25&ved=1t:429,r:19,s:0,i:179&tx=99&ty=753) try to make relief/ 3D with it.
4) Try other font, those one are not esthetic at all. But continue to make it with O capital and P capital "OnePark"
i submit you some other font for testing but could you try to test other one not just that:
Geo sans light
Caviar Dreams Bold police
-satellite
Juilius sans One
Fjalla One
Junge
Text me one
Comfortaa
5)Inspire you from those two logos:
Kickfolio:
http://kickfolio.comSquare:
https://squareup.comLinkedin:
http://www.linkedin.com5) for the colors BE CREATIVE ! but we prefer blue grey/ silver grey / pearl grey
Good luck. I let you working on it :)