great you seems to be a good designer could you make propositions with technology/ connected objects aspects and we need to understand that its parking solution I'm sure that you have the talent to do it :) thx
2) try to position the logo/pictogram to the right/left or above the name "OnePark".
3) Here is some font that you could try: Geo sans light Caviar Dreams Bold police -satellite Juilius sans One Fjalla One Junge Text me one Comfortaa
4) we didn't see the "parking" idea. Many different “P” for “Parking” signs exist in the world. In particular, the “P” sign used in public signalization in France – the country we are launching the service in first - is a white “P” in a blue square with rounded angles (as shown here: http://pdeparking.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/cropped-parking1.jpg).
Because OnePark is an innovative parking service, we will need the equivalent of a “P” sign to locate our partner garages from the street, and to distinguish them from standard forms of publicly available parking.
We would like to find a different, innovative and immediately recognizable shorthand sign to use as the identifying symbol for OnePark, which would immediately evoke the aforementioned characteristics of the new parking service we are offering.
This could take the form of a “P” or not, depending on your inspiration.
We would love to see your ideas of what this sign could look like integrated into the larger OnePark logo.
5) try other colors, BLUE GREY/ PEARL GREY / SILVER GREY