One Planet SurfLogo Design Contest

Looks pretty good, but I would like to see the bi line bigger. Would also rather not have the world focused on USA.. Will be selling in Europe and would rather see Africa and Europe. Not really sured that I like the leave on the globe. Maybe you could somehow make a wave there and fade out the continent???? Also, may want to go with the One Planet surf in Black..

thanks for the feedback,.....and here is the re works, #15, #16 .

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Thanks for sticking with it. Please see the sketches i made up and posted. I think the board reinforces the surf message which would be important if eventually just the graphic is used on a product for example. Also the font I like best so far is Papyrus for One Planet Surf and Zarfino for Sustainable Surf Style... Also do make Sustainable Surf Style too small

thanks and i'll be back soon with new re work.

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here they are. do you mean like this.....#31 , #32
but maybe i have other directions, i'll submit soon.

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Getting close.

Can you make the wave more prominent? More curl in it? Bring it in over the planet a bit more. My thinking is that when this is small on a business card or from a distance, the detail of the continents will be lost anyway. Would really like to have the wave a bit more important in the graphic. What about having the right side of the wave actually leave the circle a bit. The start of the wave i mean on the bottom..

Board looks good. should it be though a different color to stand out from the graphic? I know it is there, but I want a consumer also to identify the graphic as a surf graphic as much as an ecological graphic...

what about a second font style for the bi line?

Thanks ... not so easy with out direct contact, but like the direction you are going.

Oh ja.. the continent is now asia... I would really prefer to have Europe in focus.. that is my market.

Maybe is makes sense anyway to go away from too much continent detail. Will be difficult to carry over into a label.

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sure,......just wait

i'm so sorry, what do you mean with " what about a second font style for the bi line " ?
do you mean like this>>> #37 ?

Font style of the "Sustainable Surf Style" as used in 39.

Can you try making the board a bit longer and the color Green?

Still not really happy with the wave. Can you make it a bit thicker and come down further into the continent?

Hope that makes sense?

I think it is getting really close.

Could you change the "bi line" to Sustainable Surf Style.. drop the "life"?

Can you try to make the wave (top half) a bit thicker? ok if it comes more into the globe. Want it to look like one of those Indo barrels...haha

Could you try a bit of change with the colors? Not sure I like the green on the board. Maybe a aquamarine greenish blue color for the wave and back to blue or black for the board?

Thanks for hanging in there.

sure......

I meant to say that the "bi line" should be only "Sustainable Surf Style"..

leave out the word "life".

DO NOT INCLUDE the words "drop the life" into the logo.

i'm sorry............

"Sustainable Surf Style" !!!!!

ooopppssss.....sorry

i'll Withdraw, and change.

now, Sustainable Surf Style.... i'm so sorry not focus.

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Cool.

I like it.

I will now show to others to make a final decision.

Ciao

thanks........

could you try a variation with following:

1. the fin of surfboard facing down?
2. The right bottom side of wave coming from the right and not part of the circle form? Hope you understand
3. The "Sustainable Surf Style" centered under the "One Planet Surf"

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ok, i'll try

i try in two options, and hope you like it.>>> #68 , #69

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and al so >>> #70

Liking your number 69,

But I prefer the font used in No. 66 for "sustainable surf style"

Can you flip the board and bring it down to align with "sustainable Surf Style"?

I like the size of the wave, but could you make the brush stroke a bit thinner? It look to much Japanese style.

sure,.............: )

On image no. 72 can you flip the board so the fin is UP?

Can you make the "Sustainable Surf Style" just a bit smaller?

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Could you try two more quick changes?

use no. 72 but just move the fin out a little bit from the circle so one can see it better.

Please try that then one with the fin facing down and one with the fin facing up.

Thanks so much..

I think we are almost there.

Just had a call from a friend.

Realized that we prefer the form of the planet in 69.

Could you change 72 and the changes I just made to fit into the request above?

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sure,.....but please be patient : )

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and what about the colors? still same to 72 or move to 69?

Can you flip the board on 65 and make the "Sustainable Surf Style" a bit bigger like 72?

Keep colors like that. 69 looks too cold... ice

Can you also make the "One Planet Surf" about 20 % bigger?

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Can you make a version of 65 with the wave all the same color. I prefer the blue of the top of the wave to be used for the whole wave?

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>>> #109 , #110 , #111

OK.. Again.

Using 111. Please make the following changes.

1. The earth Green.
2. the wave a lighter color blue (not too light.. the same color as the top of the wave in 65)
3. The line "Sustainable Surf Style" 20 % smaller and centered in the middle under "One Planet Surf"
4. Make "One Planet Surf" 20% bigger.

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That may be a good idea to go with these two colors on the wave... thanks.

Can you center the "Sustainable Surf Style" on 115 like 114?

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Please make 116 and 117 like 114 for the placement of "Sustainable Surf Style". I mean that it is centered under "One Planet Surf"

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Looking good. Can you make the fin just a bit bigger? Maybe 25 % or so on all of the images after114?

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