#8, The graphis is looking better, but we still need it more full rather than tall and thin. See the contest submissions for "be" https://logotournament.com/contetsts/be for samples of the direction we would like to go in.
Also, please try variations with the font (ie. all caps, all lowercase, I do not like the flow of the e, 6 and Y
#11, the layout is looking good. The grey font could be lightened up a touch. The graphic sizing looks good. Not yet sold on the design of the graphic though, it looks very heavy. As previously indicated, the submissions in the "be" tournament were more in line with what we are looking for.
#17, if you could darken the colours a bit that would help. Also, if you could try to incorporate another colour into the design it might make it stand out some more as well.