1. The females head is tilted down slightly, tilt her head up a few degrees. I think this will help her look a bit more confident as well. .
2. Still something with her eyes are off a bit, there is almost a shifty look. Her eyeballs are looking hard left. So not sure how to correct this. Could be slightly turning her head to look forward to help move her eyeballs to the right a bit.
Let's work on the above first.
Then
3. Would like to see some variations of the banner.
4. Add the tag line under the banner.
Thank you for all your hard work. Your are very talented.
Hi & thank you! Ok, we're close and this is looking good.
Few things to tweak:
1. the female looks like she has a clenched fist, would like her hand to be more relaxed.
2. Let's go darker brown on the female's hair
3. The female's face is not quite right. Not exactly sure why we are thinking the eyes??? Could be how long her face is?? Maybe we just need a variation of her face.
4. The orange swoosh that goes behind the male should be lowered so that it does not blend with his shirt.
5. Add a banner under the On-Time Professionals the says "Electricians" and move the slogan under it.
Great! Also we think there is too much orange in the logo. Starting with the female's hair color, let's change that to brown and see how that affects the feel.
Thank you:) glad to hear the news, i will change the female as requested.
You will be receiving the EPS file as the final files. Once the EPS open in adobe illustrator or coreldraw, you can freely re-arrange both characters as you need.
But i will gladly working for you directly after the contest:)
Question. I can see having a lot of fun with these two characters in future ad campaigns, will I be able to get the full individual pieces of the design so they can be moved rearranged into other locations?
Wow. This is great. Love this concept. Feedback:
Can you make the female look happier?
Remove the gloves and the tool box and give her an ipad looking device that she is holding.
Let's try a yellow extension cord. The green tool handles are ok. Must be the letters in the tag line that we do not like. Let's try changing the green letters to black.
Wow! Great work. Shirt, hat, and pants great. Mods:
1. Extend the pant legs and make the shoes thinner.
2. The “on-time” may need more spacing between the letters.
3. Not a fan of all the green, can you show us some other variations.
4. Can you create a variation the shows an ok hand gesture instead of the thumbs up?
5. When we have this right I would like to see a female character on the other side.
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Just uploaded the final files and sent and email to you:)
need a bit times to prepare the final files
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Still something a little off with her face. Any suggestions?
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If there are a references about the banner, i can try it for you
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1. The females head is tilted down slightly, tilt her head up a few degrees. I think this will help her look a bit more confident as well. .
2. Still something with her eyes are off a bit, there is almost a shifty look. Her eyeballs are looking hard left. So not sure how to correct this. Could be slightly turning her head to look forward to help move her eyeballs to the right a bit.
Let's work on the above first.
Then
3. Would like to see some variations of the banner.
4. Add the tag line under the banner.
Thank you for all your hard work. Your are very talented.
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Please just ignore the previous ones
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Few things to tweak:
1. the female looks like she has a clenched fist, would like her hand to be more relaxed.
2. Let's go darker brown on the female's hair
3. The female's face is not quite right. Not exactly sure why we are thinking the eyes??? Could be how long her face is?? Maybe we just need a variation of her face.
4. The orange swoosh that goes behind the male should be lowered so that it does not blend with his shirt.
5. Add a banner under the On-Time Professionals the says "Electricians" and move the slogan under it.
Thank You.
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You will be receiving the EPS file as the final files. Once the EPS open in adobe illustrator or coreldraw, you can freely re-arrange both characters as you need.
But i will gladly working for you directly after the contest:)
Will be back with update asap.
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How about working with you in the future?
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Can you make the female look happier?
Remove the gloves and the tool box and give her an ipad looking device that she is holding.
You will win this contest.
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will be back with the female asap.
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and for the tagline: Franklin
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The fonts:
On time : norwester
Professionals: monserrat
I'll check the font of the tagline in an hour. Iam out for pick up my son.
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Please explain more about number 3, is it the shade of the green, or variation in some different colors?
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1. Extend the pant legs and make the shoes thinner.
2. The “on-time” may need more spacing between the letters.
3. Not a fan of all the green, can you show us some other variations.
4. Can you create a variation the shows an ok hand gesture instead of the thumbs up?
5. When we have this right I would like to see a female character on the other side.
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will be back shortly with font update
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Got it, will try and submit asap
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