#9 I like the font and styling of the letters. I am not sure about two things though: 1 is that everything is in blue, and 2 i dont think i like the little star at the end of the "s" it is too distracting, maybe doing it a litlle more subtle, or faded away, or just showing part of it would work...maybe playing around with it a little might help
#8 again everything is blue and I dont like the armour as the logo. or maybe its just that its not placed in the right place. Maybe putting it as a bigger background faded out behind the letters would help...
thanks a lot for the designs, please let me know any questions you might have...
I do like #10 a lot better. I would still like to see #8 with the faded big shield as a background behind the letters, i think it could work.
#11 and #12 I dont like the tone of green, but please dont change it to the bright green beacuase it makes me think of a "go green" campaign.
#12 i do like the idea of the logo with the arrows. i would just love to see it a little more modern, like in a 3D way, or maybe add just a little thickness to it and slant one of the sides to the front (something like the "S" in #10.)
thanks for your entries...i like the design in shield #8 i just dont like the placement of the actual shield. If you can place it as you did on #23 and play with the fading and sizing would really help.
on #21 i think we are making a great progress. two ideas: can we make the spacing of the letters in "FINANCIAL WELLNESS" a little smaller and making the spacing in between the words a little more noticeable. Also, in the arrows on the logo, can we add some curvature or shades in the white arrows to make it look like they are part of the sphere and not plain.