want characters in their 50s. a bit more realistic, like kids, but older, more detail in the go cart, with a stick brake and string steering, and more like kids going down a hill in a race with other kids, but with 55 year olds instead, not 70, looking like wild eyed kids about to get into a non lethal, yet bumps and bruises, crash. It should show the brake in the air in the back persons hand. they are not taking a cruise, but racing down a hill. i would like to see both the cliff and others, like a cross street, freeway, lake, etc. A lake may work best because it is the least theatening and provides a funnier ending. Thanks for your submission.
Love the feel of these. The handwritten part of the logo needs to be finessed. Older and Gadgets is overwhelming with in the current configuration. Perhaps with can be placed elsewhere (to the side?) then you can take Older and Gadgets and interlock the letters better. Also, can you find another handwritten font that is more unique? I've seen that font before. Also the cartoon part whicch bounces on top of the roadway is a better configuration than the cliff which looks like a logo and a cartoon married together but still looking like separate entities. It should look like one piece. Also try a color in the font so that the black is not so overpowering
Hi.. Here are 5 new entry's with different fonts with different colors and using the 3 different go-karts and 2 different couples..The elements can be mixed any way you like... Looking forward to hearing from you...thanks so much... Peg