want characters better looking and younger, in their 50s. more detail in the go cart, and more like kids going down a hill in a race with other kids, but with 55 year olds instead, not 70, looking like wild eyed kids about to get into a non lethal, yet bumps and bruises, crash. It should show the brake in the air in the back persons hand. they are not taking a cruise, but racing down a hill. And also, thank you for the variation with out a cliff. i would like to see both the cliff and others, like a cross street, freeway, lake, etc. A lake may work best because it is the least theatening and provides a funnier ending. And i think i would rather see color as well. Thanks for your submission.