Ok sorry for all of the changes. Go back to all gray for the sail, lines and OKOBOJI and get rid of the black. Keep FLATS in the gold color. Do only this and send. Then do one with those changes but slightly (and only slightly) increase the thickness of the lines and sail
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Please check revision update, Entry #875 / 876 / 877.
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Please check color variations/changes (Entry #869 / 870 / 871). Entry #871 is slightly different color than #869. If you need any changes please feel free to let me know.
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please do in a more normal red...other red had too much purple i think. Also try reversing the colors...OKOBOJI in the color and FLATS in the gray/black
lets try FLATS in some different colors (med cranberry red, soft orange, etc.? If you want take shot at some different adjustment just to see if something pops other than the current all neutral
Liking…short name for Okoboji is “Boji”. What if leave font as is but make the BOJI just a bit lighter gray and leave OKO and FLATS the same? or some variations of that idea.
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In both version, I have shown two option of thickness for the sail lines.
Please check Entry # 878 - 883. If there anything to adjust please feel free to let me know.
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If there any change to be done in the color, please feel free to let me know.
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Please check revision update, Entry #232 / 233 / 234.
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