I like your design ranked 2 right now best. I am just advising the few who have the top designs that we have had a reply from corporations branch, and they will not let us use Office 52 as an "operating as" name without a further descriptor, so we are using "business machines" which has to be in the logo somewhere. We want it there so we comply but we want it small and hardly noticed. We can add it ourselves, but it would be nice to see what you would do. Sorry for the extra trouble.
The more I look at te O52 design the more I like it. We have, however, to have our operating name in full somehow worked in to place with the logo, on letterhead etc. the name is Office 52 Business Machines. We prefer just Office 52, but as I already wrote, our corporations branch won't allow it.
what I like about this design is the Icon "O52" is based on the "oxygen symbol " O2" the stand alone mark is a unique twist that has a professional and modern look and feel, it will become a recognized symbol in a short t period of time...I've also taken in account additional design requirements such as embroidering on gold shirts and ball caps...I'v e done mock up and it looks sensational.
The O52 your placed over your recent design, the one we have ranked third, is in perspective. The o52 I like better, is ranked 8th, (but to really mix you up things might move cause I have rankig to do) but anyway, I was wondering what you would think of replacing the o52 you used with the one I like better on the 3rd ranked logo.
new layout with the "o2" look I am really liking this version and the typeface has a lot more character it's current and the stand alone icon is now part of the design...the integrity is stronger, and the "052" can be used as a stand alone mark