I like the font and color of the OCMA.If you can fade the two colors more into each other. the kicking guy looks off maybe trying a different placement and color of the kicking guy. the "ATA martial arts" try moving it in different place like the ATA on top of the OC and the MArtial Arts on the bottom of the MA and see how the design comes out.
#9 looks great however the logo will be on a black background. If you can make the martial arts guy more powerful and bolder to make that element stand out and show what our place is.