I am sorry but we are not allowed to communicate away during the contest... Is there anyway you could post a link in this discussion area? Or try and communicate it in words and I'll try.
Sure -- I'd like you to remove the leaf from the 'O.' Turn it horizontally and make it come of the bottom swoop of the bowl of the 'P.' Make sense? I will post a jpeg on the contest page to show the idea. Can I do that...?
I can do that but must be careful that the swoop is not something another designer is doing... I will check first and then submit it..hopefully before the contest ends.
Yeah! #406 -- bring the leaf down in size and de-saturate the green some? Like where it's headed. The extended type is less appealing than what you did in #357. Can you restore the typeface to its original proportion? You can also reduce the whole thing 10% in the square. Thanks!! ~G
Hi kpcd, Here are the variations based on what your suggested.
I used both cool and warm greens...there is an infinite number to choose from. Maybe you could describe the green you want. I reduced the leaf and the image and reverted back to the original type width.
Also reflected the leaf on some....Do you want the leaf vein left alone or do you just like the silhouette of the leaf?
I need to step out for a bit and will check back when I return.
I think you know the top 5 ranks in the 2nd phase of your contest can continue to make revisions after the contest ends. Thank you!! Tere