Ocean ParkLogo Design Contest

Hey Luckykid! Always glad to see your entries. Thanks so much for participating.
Take another swing at this? The owners are really looking for the more traditional interpretation of upscale luxury.
~Geoff

Thank you for the feedback Geoff. I would be glad to.
Take care - Kent

Hey, Kent. Some thoughts on #97...
> Leave the P in PARK right where it is, but kern out the word so the K falls between the bottom of the A and N. Make sense? (Think it'll help the visual balance.)
> Reduce the entire logo about 10% within the square and try a couple color options? (Might even try that center flourish—the 'stem' or 'blade in the N—a diff percentage or color..? Just wondering. :-)
Thanks so much, my man!
~G

Thank you for all the feedback Geoff.

I'd love to work on it till it is perfect for you.

Take care - Kent

#156 is gettin' some love from the creative team.
Some thoughts/requests:
1) Try a version where "PARK" is kerned out to be as wide as the EAN
2) Try one a bit tighter where the P in PARK falls between E and A.
3) Try the crescent C in a different color than O EAN. (the whole thing could be a bit richer/darker)
4) Try with a normal A crossbar?
Any of this make sense? (Whew! We are sooo picky. ; )
Please and thanks, Kent!

Thank you so much. I'll get right on those variations.

Really hope to win both your current contest :)

Thank you - Kent

I could do a version of #416 without the engraved look. You might like that even more.

Thank you!

Cool. Go for it!
~G

Thank you for this opportunity. I'll make any changes you want.

I really appreciate it - Kent

Hope your team likes mine the best, I do :)

Thanks Geoff

Kent

Thank you Geoff for the opportunity.

Take care - Kent