Ocean ParkLogo Design Contest

Nice entries, Rachel!
Especially fond of #37. Have some input/requests if I may...
Would you please consider trying the following?
First, please remove the bottom serif of the "E" that's poking up out of the wave form.
Second, refine the letter-spacing (kerning) a bit. The O and C are too far apart while the E and A are too tight. Just needs evened-out overall.
Please and thanks!
-Geoff

Quick question -- looked again and realized you probably left the bottom E serif so it wouldn't look like an F, right? My bad ; )
~Geoff

Thanks so much!

Yes, in making your edits to this one, I realized it does look like an "F". The edited one is #40.

Agreed. Maybe restore the serif and darken P A R K just a bit? Loving it!
~Thanks~

Will do, I will upload shortly!

#41 is the newest version. I made "OCEAN" a little more readable, and PARK a 10% darker.

Thanks!

No problem, thank you!

Hate to be so picky, but will you reduce the overall size of entry #41 to the size of #37? Make sense?
Thanks. Then I'll quit nit-picking. Promise. Maybe. : )

No worries, I've uploaded it. It's #90.

Thanks!

Hi! Please let me know if you would like any edits to #348.

Thank you!