The line separating the words was nice but removed. Try making the O and D much larger compared to the other letters and use something other than a round thing to dot the "i" (maybe a star, a sun, a yacht streering wheel, etc).
Like the idea but can you try to lower 'Drive' a bit so it is still overlapping but just less? Also we don't love the 'O' and 'D' here so maybe experiment with different versions of those 2 letters.
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