OCEAN DRIVELogo Design Contest

Nice. Can you show us other color variations and backgrounds? Also can u show us how you would adapt this to being on one line (example for a shop's signage)?

Dear Sir,
What about this?

Distinction between "c" and "e" is much better but "O" & "D" needs to be bigger and all the distraction around isn't complementing the lettering.

Thank you for your submittal.

Dear Sir,
This is the updates on #107 and #108.

Thank you so much.

Pls make even more of a distinction between the "c" and "e" because although improved, it still needs more.

Also pls make the "O" & "D" dramaticly larger than the other letters and that will allow for u to dot the "i".

Thank u for ur submittal.

Interesting! Can you make more of a distinction between the letters "c" and "e" in "Ocean" as they look too similar and the "c" can be misread as an "e"?

Also can you try to make the letters "O" and "D" significantly larger than the other letters so that way, maybe the looping won't look so tight?

Thank you for your submittal.