OCEAN DRIVELogo Design Contest

Ok

Very nice. Can you also show us how this logo could also be adapted to being on one line (example for a shop sign) instead of the words on top of each other?

Thank you for all your submittals.

thicker

Thicker "O" and "D" and thicker bigger star (maybe oversized would be nice).

This one is better than the last. Thank u.

yes bikini bottom...ok I'll revised it

U mean a bikini bottom? That would need to be changed maybe to a 5 sided star or another appropriate symbol pls.

Also pls thicken the thin parts of the "O" and "D" much more.

Thank u for ur submittals.

the symbol on the dot i is an underwear

Like the "O" and "D" linking but not the underlining part of the D which is crossing over the 'r'. Perhaps if you lower that line it could be better. Also, what is the symbol you are using as the dot of the 'i'? We can't recognize it. Please try to make the thin parts of the 'O' and the 'D' much thicker. Thanks a lot for submitting this.

Same applies here.

Same applies here.

Not memorable or unique enough. Nothing stands out. Maybe try to hook/link the O & D and style the letters to be less plain. Try putting a symbol instead of a plain dot for the "i". Thanks for submitting this!

The O is a nice touch but please refer to the LUV SUM attachment we uploaded in the briefing for inspiration on what sort of lettering we are looking for.

Nice but a bit too orderly. Would like to see a version of this which has some unique aspects which are memorable because although neat, there's nothing that really stands out about it. I also would want the letters 'O' and 'D' to be capitalized.