I’m thinking maybe simplify the pattern of the circle, and take away the 3D in the hopes that the “Oakland heating” is more legible at a distance. Thanks!
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- more simplified in black and white only.
- give little bit 3D fx on text OAKLAND HEATING to give more strong and dynamic.
what do you thing?
Remove stripes in background
Remove the established 2020 sign
Can we make the entire circle match the style of the bottom?
I really like this. I must consider that this logo will be on hats/T-shirt’s and coats etc... I really like the wrench just like you have it but in effort to make something that’s extremely easy to stitch on or have printed on clothing, can we stick to straight black and white ok the entire design and make the wrench much less intricate with its detailed design? Love this one can’t wait to see this change, thank you!
Can you take out the & symbol and spell it? That looks really cool but would like to spell “and”. Also any cool way to write the company name without the ribbon? I really like the wrench and detail but interested in seeing the words written a little different. Thank you!!
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make the top of the circle a double line
any other?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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any other suggestion?
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what do you thing.?
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- more simplified in black and white only.
- give little bit 3D fx on text OAKLAND HEATING to give more strong and dynamic.
what do you thing?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please check my revision base on your last feedback on entry #71
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Remove stripes in background
Remove the established 2020 sign
Can we make the entire circle match the style of the bottom?
I really like this. I must consider that this logo will be on hats/T-shirt’s and coats etc... I really like the wrench just like you have it but in effort to make something that’s extremely easy to stitch on or have printed on clothing, can we stick to straight black and white ok the entire design and make the wrench much less intricate with its detailed design? Love this one can’t wait to see this change, thank you!
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more bold and strong.
what do you thing? any other suggestion?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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change the & symbol to AND
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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you can check my revision on entry #65
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
best rgd, mbahdjoyo