O'NeillLogo Design Contest

I appologize if I misunderstood your request.

Here is a version with a new fly. I hope it is closer to what you wanted.

Regards.

I guess I was misleading with my last comment. I said "can you take the fly from the one ranked first. and incorporate it into your logo" What I meant was to convey the fact that that is the style of fly I am interested in. I wan hoping you could use that as an inspiration for your design and do something along those lined, but your design. I would never ask you to do something against the rules. I apologize for the confusion.

We have rules here and one rule in the "Client Help" area says:

"We require that you do not ask one Designer to use elements or concepts from another Designer. The general rule is that, if a Designer was the first to submit the idea, they essentially own that concept or idea for the remainder of the contest."

With all due respect, I cannot take the fly from the first ranked design and use it. It would be against the rules.

Thank you for understanding my position.

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Ok, now that you can see the other logos can you take the fly from the one ranked first. and incorporate it into your logo. but black or back outline? also can you get rid of the knot where the line joins the fly?

Better, let me think on it. thank you.

I connected the line to the fly in a straight way.

Black an smaller fly. If you figure out what bothers you at the fly, please let me know.

Thanks.

This is my favorite so far, but the fly is still bothering me. I don't really know what to tell you to do. Maybe make it black and a little smaller? Maybe take it out? I am just not sure. I really like this one, there is just something about the fly.

Good stuff. this one will make the finals. Thanks

Done.

can you make the fly about 1/2 the size it is now.

And lighter green.

With the updated fly.

Thanks.

OK, Can you make the green in the letters just a little lighter. and I want to do something with the fly, but I am not sure what. check out this link
https://www.google.com/search?q=fishing+fly+line+sketch&espv=2&biw=1920&bih=971&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj_0NPcyrnKAhUHpR4KHR7eCZIQ_AUIBigB#imgrc=qpYdzJPE4q7HMM%3A

the fly in the lower left corner is the type I think I would like to see in there. Thank you.

Sure, take your time.

Thank you, too.

my favorite so far. let me think on this for a bit, thank you.

New versions.

Thanks.

Can you make the fly a little smaller and angle it so it is more like a written apostrophe. Also can you outline the letters in a sharp black.

Thank you for the feedback.

Here are the revised versions. I hope the hook is ok now.

Regards.

Can you turn the fly around so the hook will follow the same form as a written apostrophe?

Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).
Thank you.