Hey bud, you see what you did with there palm tree on this one.... can you do that to the 4 section logo you designed also? What do you think? Could be cool huh?
Would it look to busy if we changed the white to aqua blue? That might take away from the Orange and loose that pop. Also, let's get rid of the ' in the top box.
Some things I like about this —
top row is O/feet/"O'Connor",
bottom row house/H/"HOMES"
Background as one color feels less busy. The feet alone being orange just pops that small detail nicely. I'm liking this… let me know what you think bud, cheers
There's another potential solution — you could have the logo with no feet/IVF and instead have a separate badge that appears alongside the logo. Maybe there are some instances you want to use it and others that you don't. (Something like "Proudly supporting IVF").
I just thought I'd put the idea out there.
Happy to go with whatever you feel is going to represent you the best. You need to love it.
I'm signing off for the night, will catch up with you tomorrow.
I'll give it a go… let you take a look and decide if it works for you.
It might not tell the story in the way it is in the other design... leading to house. But maybe it'll work in a different way, as a component of your brand. As long as it doesn't mix up the message of the whole logo.
Just make sure you look at it from the perspective of your target market when making the final decisions.
I would not recommend shadows in the text — keeping it as clean, solid text is much more professional. Shadows just don't reproduce well and don't work for signage.
I'd suggest just making either name or 'homes' in the blue.
Shading is also going to cause problems if you intend to reproduce in signage and print items. Solid colors are much better to work with.
This one's a bit of a recap — I've created the other extreme of baby feet, the more jelly bean shape. Any good? And colors revised. Let me know how we're looking and any adjustments.
Well the good thing is the orange does go with the teal pretty well as they're quite complementary colors. I can rework next round when feet are sorted.
I've made them kind of a triangle shape (narrow heel) which is baby-like – I think that having a trail of footprints looks more grown up as babies are not walking so maybe that's why they don't look like baby feet, even if they do!! Lol! Make sense?
Not sure what to do about that :( maybe minimizing it to just two orange feet and the rest blue? So that grey and blue are the dominate colors but we still show our support a little
Sweet. My partner keeps saying they look like adult feet not baby feet. I told her what makes baby feet different that adult feet other than size??? Lol
I've made the path a series of stepping stones, much like the path of IVF.
I was worried about the feet turning this logo into too much of a niche design but it also looks like freedom and bare feet — at the beach maybe — so it has a broad appeal.
Ok great. You'll see the idea I've just uploaded. That can be a starting point. But as I said I'd really like to put a bit more thought and time into it. Any feedback on this one will get us on track. Thanks!
I would just do something new with baby orange feet, towards a door that opens maybe. Palm tree might still work. Let's dump the golf. Let's stick with Greys and Orange theme though (same font in O'Connor Homes). And anything else you can think of would be great.
Awesome... ok, would be good to have a quick chat. Are we talking about a completely new icon, or incorporating something around the baby feet into the existing one (I personally think a fresh start might be a good idea just to get an idea or two out there). It might appear patched together if the feet are just added in on the existing design. Might not tell the story you're wanting. And might kind of conflict with the golf etc, just too much going on.
And congrats on your little one, that's just great!
I've put together a quick idea and will upload it but I'm more interested in feedback than ranking it, so please let me know if the concept has potential.
I've just woken up here in Australia. I will have a think about this as quickly as I can. I don't want to just throw something together before final phase (which starts under an hour). If I'm ranked number 1 I will be able to upload the concepts when I've done them. Thanks.
Hi, i spoke to my partner and have made a couple of changes that we would like to see what you come up with. We're very passionate about this and it would be great if we could implement this in our logo
This one is the best from the new 4 you made. The blue you're using in the Bringing Tampa Bay looks different than the color you used in the logo. Can you get them to match?
I really couldn't get anything working that really improved this design. It just made things too busy... maybe that wrapping around palm could work if the circle was a lot simpler... just a house for example
I like the fact the scale of everything is (roughly) the same and everything's contained... feels clean.
I can take a look at whether those ideas might work (I also need to check no one else has a tree wrapping around a circle! – if so I can go with that... leave it with me to take a quick look at the idea
My partner (not me lol) was wondering what it would look like with a palm tree wrapping around the outside of the O? Or a palm tree where the vertical line is. I actually like it the way it is though
Great. I've combined the palm and tee in the one segment, and added the H.
Two new font options uploaded – let me know how either of these work for you (sorry, I could not see Trump reference so I hope one of these is on track).
I might just do O'Connor Homes in a fine high end font all in a dar grey as there's a lot going on with the other part of the logo. I;ve got to say you did great work here
I love what you did here. I would put an H in one of the other squares. Try to see if you can find a different font for O'Connor Homes. Something fine a luxury feel . See my Trump Logo for an idea on the font style
Hi, during this phase of the contest only the top 5 ranked designers (not top 5 entries) can load new designs.
If you'd like me to revise you'd need to improve me to top 5 designers. Even if temporarily. I can look at that right now and upload soon. Thanks.
I felt incorporating the family element just made this design too busy — less is more in this case. O in flag is a reminder of name if icon used stand-alone. (eg for Facebook profile, etc)
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top row is O/feet/"O'Connor",
bottom row house/H/"HOMES"
Background as one color feels less busy. The feet alone being orange just pops that small detail nicely. I'm liking this… let me know what you think bud, cheers
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I just thought I'd put the idea out there.
Happy to go with whatever you feel is going to represent you the best. You need to love it.
I'm signing off for the night, will catch up with you tomorrow.
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It might not tell the story in the way it is in the other design... leading to house. But maybe it'll work in a different way, as a component of your brand. As long as it doesn't mix up the message of the whole logo.
Just make sure you look at it from the perspective of your target market when making the final decisions.
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I'd suggest just making either name or 'homes' in the blue.
Shading is also going to cause problems if you intend to reproduce in signage and print items. Solid colors are much better to work with.
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I'll be online in the morning (9 hours from now).
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Note change of circle to orange (the story) and roof to grey.
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I was worried about the feet turning this logo into too much of a niche design but it also looks like freedom and bare feet — at the beach maybe — so it has a broad appeal.
Anyway, thoughts?
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And congrats on your little one, that's just great!
I've put together a quick idea and will upload it but I'm more interested in feedback than ranking it, so please let me know if the concept has potential.
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I can take a look at whether those ideas might work (I also need to check no one else has a tree wrapping around a circle! – if so I can go with that... leave it with me to take a quick look at the idea
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Two new font options uploaded – let me know how either of these work for you (sorry, I could not see Trump reference so I hope one of these is on track).
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Apostrophe included as the H has been dropped to simplify the segments. Thoughts?
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If you'd like me to revise you'd need to improve me to top 5 designers. Even if temporarily. I can look at that right now and upload soon. Thanks.
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Any constructive feedback so that I can fine tune is very welcome, thanks.
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