Ella! Looks like this one is the one they like with a few tweaks. Could the NYS AHPERD be a little bigger on the bottom. Not as wide as the slogan but a little bigger. two curls to the tail and the other jumper from the swing. Thank you.
That's it! Thank you. I'm going to survey a few people on the style so it will probably be a little bit before I get back to you. Thank you for making this such an enjoyable experience.
This is perfect with the way the words are put there is too much space between the phrases. Move them closer together please so then everything is under the purple.
We're getting there. It is all under the Purple now but I'd still like the walk to be under Help them to, the run to be under Teach them to, and the fly to be under Dare them to. Just like in 122. I also like the line between the phrases in #122.
Thank you. I'm not explaining this very well. In the same line like this. But to have the words all under the purple of the tree. I tried to show it in idea #129. Sorry for the confusion
Thank you. I guess you aren't able to move them in just a little put and still keep them in line? I would like "help them to walk, teach them to run, dare them to fly to stay one line but not to extend past the edges of the purple of the tree.
I didn't explain that well. I'm sorry. I was hoping to move in the Help them to walk and the Dare them to Fly to that they are under the Purple part of the tree but keep the NYS AHPERD under the slogan. Sorry.
I really like this. Could we try three more different fonts so I can share with others and they can take a look all at once to compare. Thank you very much.
Trying some new fonts that I have listed in comments below for the Help them to, Teach them to, dare them to. But leave the Walk, Run, Fly the font that it is currently. Thank you.
Can we try a couple different fonts for the "help them to's" I think it needs to be something fun and look like it is hand written if possible. I found a website with a few sample fonts and if we could try some that might be similar that would be great.
1. Grape Nuts
4. Reenie Beanie Font
9. Timothy Font
16. Over the Rainbow
23. Ludicrous
24. Tragic Marker
26. Gunny Written https://www.creativebloq.com/typography/best-handwriting-fonts-12121527
I think I really like this one. It flows with the rest of the design. I would like to get rid of the swirls on the tail. Could we flip the image so the head is on the right? Also could we the bright blue for an eye on him? Thanks.
Ella, After you have switched the colors, could you send me that version and then we would like to try a couple other phoenixes as the center focal. We'd like them all to be The reddish/orange you did with this one. I hope these links work and only if legal. Variations of these are fine if copyrighted.
Can we move this above the NYS AHPERD and put the NYS AHPERD below and a little smaller. The focus should be the Walk Run Fly, not NYS AHPERD. Thank you
I would like to try this in bright orange/ red colors. I will probably like the black more but want to see if we can give the impression of the phoenix on "fire"
Ella, Sorry, I called you Emma. I apologize. So let's get started. I would like to make this project flow a little better. I personally love the phoenix you put in. I have to convince a few people. I am going to use the mark up tool with my suggestions. Thank you.
Emma, I just wanted to say thank you very much for all your time and commitment to this project. You have added and changed so much for me and even if you may not have liked it, you tried to do what I was asking. You have made this very personal for me. I look forward to working with you the next seven days and really making this project flow.
Thank you very much for you time and patience. I am not going to make any changes today. I need to figure out what design works best for our organization and has the most potential. Thank you again for working so hard on this.
I played with some fonts and thought I could share them in here but it doesn't work. The font I used for Help them to, Teach them to, and Dare them to was called Caveat. It looked like handwriting.
Move this side down and Put more space between the help them to and the walk so it is separated. The fly need to go to the other side. Could the green in "teach them to" be the same green as the "leaves"
Need a different jumper from the swing so it doesn't look as much like the silhouette in the hands. My fault on that one. Could we also put him a little higher.
Would like the brighter colors like in image # 84 but leave in the brown and the black. The bright blue is gone and the orange doesn't seem as bright. Would like these colors to pop.
Sorry, I think we were overlapping in other in time. Love the flamingo in the D. Thank you. I like the brighter blue on the child swinging. I'm liking the high five but going to send that out to other to see what they think. Thank you. Might be a little bit before I get back to you. I want to see what a few others think.
I've been told this may be too similar to this year's image so that is why I am asking to explore changing this image. I really like it and may go back to it but I don't want to impede on the person and image from this year.
Ella, Thank you. This is really taking shape. I know I've asked for so interesting things but just testing the whole image out. I have put comments on the design.
Walk needs to go under, Like this
Help them to
WALK
Teach them to
RUN
Dare them to
FLY
But still keep it in line. Sorry couldn't do that in this Annotation.
Don't like this being three colors in a row. Do you need me to get you the new pride flag colors. Not sure I'll like it but it include brown and black along with the blue and pink. One color at a time.
Put the primary word "walk", "Run", "Fly" centered under the teach them to and please put Walk, Run, Fly in black and also in bigger font. Keep the color for the Help them, teach them, Dare them.
I'm sorry, I explain things poorly. I'll try to use the tools to explain better. I was hoping for two different designs, one with the "bird" being blue and one with it being "black" but have to admit I kind of like the over lap. I'd like the "roots" to entwine more into the NYS AHPERD if possible. Thank you again. I have some people looking at the designs this afternoon so I'm sure we'll be trying some other thoughts.
I don't know if I like it more but I think the green stands out a little more than the yellow did. There are a couple things I'd like to try to see how it looks if you don't mind. I'd like to try the "bird" in bright blue and in a silhouette of black. I'd also like one of the kids to be doing a cartwheel if possible and is it possible to put the front wheel of the bike in front of the tree. I don't like it being cut off for some reason. Thank you again.
I like the colors of the "bird" in this one but may switch it to blue if we change the word's colors. I may think about making the words and people different colors. I feel the chair is lost in the yellow and I don't want it to be. "teach them to run" in grass green along with the chair, and "dare them to fly" in the in the blue. I hope this makes sense. Thank you.
This is nice but I like the way the "bird" looks in the other one. I like that it is a little different that the rest. I may think about making the words and people different colors. I feel the chair is lost in the yellow and I don't want it to be. "teach them to run" in grass green along with the chair, and "dare them to fly" in the in the blue. Thank you.
Curious if we could bring back the racer so it is a little more symmetrical and if the kids could be in red and the cycler in yellow to match the words below. Thank you so much. Really enjoying this design.
Ella, thank you for the time you have spent. I do like this design. I am still hoping to do rainbow colors for the "leaves" of the "tree". Also curious if we could have the two people on the ground a little further from the "tree" and I wonder how the "bird" person would look in a more vibrant color. I would also like to put the "help them to walk" in one color of the leaves on the tree, "teach them to run" in another color, and "dare them to fly" in another color. The color could match the corresponding character in the drawing. I like the NYS AHPERD in black and the font. Thank you again.
It is a combination of all three that I really like. I like the wings on the person in this one and possibly to put legs on it also but I also like the leaves of the tree still being on it and if they could be in rainbow colors that would be great. The person on the left could be learning to walk a little more instead of running. I'm trying to figure out how that may look. I like the racing chair in the other picture more but I would like the center part to be the largest and focal point. I think I also like the center being green possibly. I don't care for the orange but really like the purple hands. Thank you.
This one is still my favorite. I am curious if on the left side of the design you could put a child walking, on the right a person in a racing wheel chair and in the tree the orb could be a person "spreading their wings" ready to fly out of the tree. I do love the intertwined hands creating the tree.
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I use my own font because the fonts you choose are all paid
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1. Grape Nuts
4. Reenie Beanie Font
9. Timothy Font
16. Over the Rainbow
23. Ludicrous
24. Tragic Marker
26. Gunny Written
https://www.creativebloq.com/typography/best-handwriting-fonts-12121527
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1. https://www.google.com/search?q=images+of+a+phoenix+rising+from+the+ashes&rlz=1C1GCEA_enUS883US883&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwik1rziiqj3AhWek4kEHTPxB1AQ_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1536&bih=722&dpr=1.25&safe=active&ssui=on#imgrc=x3z5pfdhJsXufM
2. https://www.google.com/search?q=circular+phoenix&rlz=1C1GCEA_enUS883US883&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiLgejAi6j3AhWchIkEHVA6B9EQ_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1536&bih=722&dpr=1.25&safe=active&ssui=on#imgrc=DJJeFL7SG9L2hM Would like this one facing right instead of left.
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Help them to
WALK
Teach them to
RUN
Dare them to
FLY
But still keep it in line. Sorry couldn't do that in this Annotation.
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