Is there an electric style font you could use on this to emphasis the "electrify"? Maybe a few different font options? The people are better in this one.
Some of my team tells me that they thought the people were trees when they first saw this. Is there anyway to make it clearer that these are figures of people?
You might be able to pull in some of your graphical elements from earlier designs where you had a circle that was colored and the “people” were the negative space (or white) and the bottom part of the circle was a lightning bolt.
The shape of Iron Man is fine, as long as there isn't any copyright infringement. If you look at that scene, however, you see lots of people that are grabbing on to each other, and together they were able to do more than even Iron Man could do himself. So, what is missing is the idea of the others and him enabling them all to achieve something together that none could achieve alone.
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