Thank you for this! It does communicate a positive message. However, it skews a bit more feminine than we'd like. That said, the creative direction feels like it is moving forward. We'd love to see more of your work!
We're looking for a powerful, exciting, colorful and compelling logo that speaks to the vibrancy of the people that we serve our mission. Unfortunately, we don't think that a more sober look would be good for us. That said, your original creativity was moving in the right direction.
We love #138. Can you provide further definition to the figures so that we can IMMEDIATELY, at first glance, see that they are people that have their arms in the air? Maybe you can remove a few of the lowest-hanging leaves, so as to further illustrate the difference between the leaves and the people's heads?...