It would be interesting to see if the flight vehicle could create the serif font part of the "1". We should try this on the other one I'm commenting on as well.
Similarly here, how would the "1" change if you gave it some of the features of a serif font. Also, I like the original aircraft better than this one. Look up "hypersonic vehicles" and see if you can do something along those lines.
How does it end up looking if you make the "1" appear to be a serif font to make it plainer that it is a "1". Just thought that might be a nice experiment. Could be subtle.
Can we try a couple of variations on this? As with the "coin" version, make the rocket trail "1" more vertical, and align it better with the "u" - really need to make the "10" look more normal. Maybe try with the "anniversary" as a banner/ribbon and under the "10"
Perhaps "Anniversary" inside the blue circle. Some alternate vehicle shapes would be nice. I don't want anything that looks too much like the Space Shuttle. Perhaps a modern or futuristic flight vehicle. I'm also envisioning using a version of it on a coin, so I'm wondering if there could be a version that fit somewhat within a circle.
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if you want to change anything, please let me know.
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