Notable Creations, Inc.Logo Design Contest

hope your logo works and contact me at business builders in CA if you need any promotional merchandise as that is my primary business!
Carol

Hi Carol,
Thanks for your design, I really like it. But I have been advised & come to realize that simpler may be better for my type of products. Hope to work with you again on future projects. Best regards, apn

tag line in a different font a bit larger.

different font and tag line on top larger and in 2 lines

Leave it in 1st so I can upload... I will change to a different font to try...
Carol

Hi Carol
I am trying to decide between your design and a few of the one ranked 2nd. We have 3 days on the extension. I think the slogan is a bit hard to read. Any thoughts or ideas regarding it? Thx

wil adjust tomorrow

I will be back tomorrow evening and can change it then. thanks
Carol

I like the stronger font but not sure about the two solid gears. thx

Hi carol. I am traveling and trying to extend this phase. I would like to see some variations and give feedback but a bit tricky with my cell and my environment. Any other ideas before your trip would be nice but if extended we should have time mid week. Thx

thanks for ranking... let me know if you want to see options... I am off Saturday to a retreat and may not have time for doing this then... but happy to make any changes ... may try with different font.
Carol

Indeed! But add the crescent with the dawn of light back in. I was trying to stay away from gears, but not sure what it would look like for those "planets" to be gears...? Nice work & keep pitching!

I love whimsey.... I guess that comes from my background in the game business!
carol

I call this: throw enough ideas against the wall and something may stick....
maybe a bit less feminine?
carol

Cute idea Carol, but not for me ;-) Will also ask others their opinion too.

OK just trying different ideas... I like what you do.... so it is fun to think about it.

Sometimes we make the best things from abstraction... it can be whatever you want... I see different things in this one.

Not sure what this is. You have the most comments from me, so that is good ;-)

This is my favorite piece of your offerings (for my theme). Would like to get you in the running. Can you make a more masculine version?

Hi Carol, I like your ideas & skills. This is too feminine though. Would prefer middle ground. Thx

and the crystal ball... I wish I had.

could not resist a tribute to the "better mousetrap" cliche.
feedback would be helpful
Carol