from the client: "He also like's 28's concept, except would rather see one guy with the parachute not opening" So maybe try for a group of parachutes? OK so he kinda likes your warped sense of humor!
OK this is a top contender with some changes -it is a bit too busy -take out some of the chutes - make clear "O guy" chute not opening - maybe take out or make smaller the red splat - they fear people will take it wrong! You are definitely on the right track somewhere between # 28 and #45