Not bad ! Here are some suggestions. 1. Please replace the antlers with realistic antlers, this is a must. These look "cartoonish". The antlers should be brown or ivory color. These are the two antler color options we would like to see. 2. Stick to rich colors. 3. NIO does not have to be so big, nor so wide. Please reduce the size and increase the size of the words "Northern Ivory Outdoors". Remove the word "Inc." 4.The mountains can be a little taller and not as wide. 5. Please try and incorporate deer and caribou antlers.....all 3 animals represent our "ivory". And if possible the face of a bear. Maybe the deer,caribou and bear in the form of a silhouette on top or something. Please work best you can with these suggestions you are doing a great job so far. Thankyou.
Very nice. Much better. Like the mountains and the caribou and deer. Try and improve on the detail of the antlers. Would like for them to be as realistic as possible. Also, the deer in the logo looks like a mule deer...would prefer to see a whitetail deer....the antlers are a little different on a whitetail deer. Also like the bear. However, what happened to the moose antlers? Is there some way you can incorporate into the logo? However very nice. Continue the good work. Thanks
Maybe the moose antlers can come off the side and bottom of this same logo (#25).....blending into the same brown that we see on the bottom of the logo? See what you can do.
Your logo is looking very nice (#26 and 27). All that is missing is a little more detailing. The moose antlers are much nicer than the ones you had on your previous logos. Much more realistic. I think you can also improove on the caribou and deer antlers to make them more realistic as well. Nicer deer too. We would like you to add some detailing to bring out the antlers....kind of like a 3d effect. Also, at this point we would like to see color variations. Use more richer colors. Try using "ivory" color for the antlers. This fits well with the logo name "Ivory". With propor detailing and richer colors this may work out. If I look at your other logos for example the green in #17 is richer, the background in #19 is a rich color, gold is a rich color, the black and silver in your previous logos is also a rich color. You can also improove on the brown to make it more of a velvet rich brown.etc... Great work! We are almost there. Thanks.
We feel the logos are getting to complicated. We think maybe we would like something more simple for branding purposes. Something you look at for the first time and dont forget it. Something original and artistic. Something that will bring out the essence of the words "Northern" and "Ivory". Something that is easy to embroider on a cap or shirt. Like for example the Browing logo or the Bone Collector logo. They speak for themselves, they are simple logos yet creative, and because they are simple and unique they are not forgotten. Please try your best to come with something original and simple. Thankyou for trying again.