This is similar to my 1st ranked logo but changes the shape of the pool (water) and the shape of the putting green to an S shape similar to your other logo at "ckgreen.com"
Awesome!! I love it!! Our project manager has an idea to make the green a little less elaborate, look at our other company’s logo on ckgreens.com and how it’s a simple s curve with a flag from the side view and out that in the foreground instead of a whole green
What if you made the foreground of this one a putting green? I would make the putting surface a more lime-ish green and the fringe a little darker so it pops out in the photo, I tried to mark up the logo so you can see what I mean but it’s very rudimentary 😅
What if you made the putting green in the foreground of this one so it’s more visible? Like where the letters are on the other logo, that way the pin markers and flags are more visible :)
Thank you so much! You have been so responsive and going above and beyond with every suggestion:)
This is great, I love the clean font and I love everything else about it. Can we try a version of this that has turf (or even a putting green!) on the right side of the water, no Bear or trees. So sort of simplified but keeping the mountains and water and the sky exactly as they are
Also, to add to my above suggestions, can you try a different font for the NorCal Turf part? I like how it's very bold and blocky but we don't love that font
i love the new mountains and the new water, i generally love this shape but my boss really likes the round, I also know he's not a fan of the blocked sky, but we do like the way the sun is. Can you make the sky more of a gradual ombre?
Overall love the changes you made, but let's go back to circle and you can take out the california shape at the bottom so it's less busy please :)
Hi JMC, love how you included all the elements we like in a way that is one cohesive emblem. I am not crazy about the style of the individual elements -- wondering if you could do the same thing but with more "vintage" looking (or just less stylized/ sharp)
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This is a simple and clean concept
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please check #191 #192 and #193
I uploaded a design with a simple, clean, luxurious and classic concept
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same as my design #167
just change the font type
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This is similar to my 1st ranked logo but changes the shape of the pool (water) and the shape of the putting green to an S shape similar to your other logo at "ckgreen.com"
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This is similar to my 1st ranked logo but changes the shape of the pool (water) to be more dynamic
the logo looks cleaner and less busy
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turf has been added under the word "supply"
please check #157
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revisions for this version are available in #155 and #156
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I hope this is in the direction you want
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revisions for this design are in #138 and #139
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If you need other adjustments, don't hesitate to contact me
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I will immediately revise the design and upload it soon
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Thank you so much! You have been so responsive and going above and beyond with every suggestion:)
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the idea of including a silhouette of grass in the negative space in the letter U in the word TURF
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If you have any ideas to add to this design, feel free to let me know
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So happy to get this rating and guidance
please check the revised design in #126
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fix the mountain so it's not too heavy
added grass and a putting green complete with flags and some golf balls
The logo looks simpler, cleaner, more luxurious and still classic
If you need any changes, don't hesitate to let me know and I will be very happy to work for you
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what about this revision?
Also, what about this new font?
If you want other changes, don't hesitate to let me know
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James
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Thank you for this extraordinary feedback
revisions are in progress
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Also, to add to my above suggestions, can you try a different font for the NorCal Turf part? I like how it's very bold and blocky but we don't love that font
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Overall love the changes you made, but let's go back to circle and you can take out the california shape at the bottom so it's less busy please :)
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change the shape of the logo and change several elements
also makes the skyline look vintage
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James
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Thank you for your rating and feedback
I will immediately revise the design according to your guidance
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