we like the font but not really drawn to the leaf or the circle detail. We also like the difference in the gray writing for yoga and SUP in contrast to the black for Nomad
We feel more and more drawn to the idea of having the letters created using symbols. i.e using feathers to create one letter, maybe paddles for another, a dream catcher, mountains, the sun... incorporating symbols that represent the elements in the lettering. I also want to emphasize more of a gypsy/bohemian feel. Maybe since this font is so striking, using the elements or paddles as lines or shapes to distinguish the logo.
Hi! Awesome work! Just a couple thoughts... I love the paddles as the sundials. I do like the dream catcher but feel it might be a bit too busy. Love the arrow though. Maybe incorporate that in the sundial. Not loving the wrap around the diameter of the sundial and think the actual sundial can be more rustic looking, more on a black and white line drawing rather than the gray shading inside. Seems a bit computerized, I like more of a beautiful illustration. I like #20 with more of a black and white feel. I like #20 a lot. Maybe use the paddle outline as dashes framing yoga and Sup then use the triangle glyphs representing the elements as the four sundials. I really like 12, 13, 15 also. Maybe make the feather more illustrated and bigger to emphasize the shape of a parentheses. Maybe the "A" more like a teepee and some kind of illustration or suggestion of symbol in the "d" These really are great!
#20 maybe instead of the sundial on the side, make it in to the "o" the triangle element glyphs could be like arrows pointing representing north south east and west outside of the circle diameter. It may make the sundial look like a sun, which could be cool.
loving the progression! Couple thoughts... Maybe add roman numerals to the sundial since it represents time. Or make the triangles more of an outline bc I like all of the line work. I like 35 the best but the font in 21. Maybe the parentheses in a lighter tone than the font to differentiate.
Hi. wow you have done so much work! I like the paddle used in 61 but maybe use that in the "a" as the top line. Also, the sundial is awesome but its feeling a bit too busy. Maybe simplify all of it a bit. I loved the font originalyy and still like it, but it is feeling a bit rigid rather than bohemian, whimsical.. Maybe incorporate an arrow in the first strike of the "n" look up gypsy, hippie, illustrated arrows for reference.
i do like the contrast in 55, 57 and 58. But not sure how that would translate on a website, business cards, etc... Ive been looking at them too much maybe but it starting to feel like its losing the actual name of the company. The eye is bouncing around a bit too much. I really am liking these!
im feeling drawn to 53 with the "yoga and sup" in 61. I love 61 and 72 but its starting to feel too busy. It needs to be simplified more. I still can't decide between a paddle underlining "yoga and sup" or the wording like 61. These are all great! Maybe the paddle over the "m" but simplify the sundial and font in 72. Lighten the font a bit still keeping a variation in grey between the word and the parentheses.
ok. I am liking 89 and 90 the best. I do not want "since 2015" on it anywhere. I still think the sundial can be simpler. I am feeling more and more drawn to a super simplified version. No gray scale inside the sundial and maybe the arrow or pointing part of the sundial could be more simple. Also the roman numerals would go all around the sundial, not just in an arch. I'm starting to think the paddle is a bit distracting. You've done so much work reigning in my crazy all across the board ideas. I appreciate your efforts!
wow so many to choose from. I think I am liking the sundials without the roman numerals bc it is starting to look too much like a clock. I would like it to be more compass/less clock. Directional indicators may be better and more simple. N,E,S,W or use the triangle glyphs for earth, air, fire, water. I like 48 with 117 "yoga and SUP" I like 121 with one line in the "d" and only one line in the "a" I like the difference in tone between "nomad" and "yoga and SUP"
compass and the fire earth symbols not sure if i can do what you asked me to do " I would like it to be more compass/less clock. Directional indicators may be better and more simple. N,E,S,W or use the triangle glyphs for earth, air, fire, water." read the following guidelines below -
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entry 48 without the sundial. 147 without the sundial. 119 without the sundial and without the two dashes on each side of "yoga and sup." 72 and 89 without the sundial and dashes surrounding "yoga and SUP." 21 and 23 without the sundials and with a different font for "yoga and sup" and maybe shrink the length of "yoga and SUP" a bit. I know these are such contradicting requests but I am really thinking simple.
Ok can I see 168 and 163 with the "o" a bit smaller and the four directional lines of the sundial reach outside the "o" maybe with each element triangle glyph pointing in all four directions outside the actual "o" I like the starburst look of the directional lines.