I absolutely love the simplicity in this. Mayne play with a thinner font? Or one less bold. Maybe a bit more line work in the sundial aspect of the "O." I really like your style. Thanks for submitting
Can I see 178 and 149 with the starburst of 140 without the extra detail around the "o" with the starburst reaching outside all four corners of the "o" probably shrinking the "o" a bit. I will rank you first this afternoon. Thanks.