Dont love the parentheses. They seem a little too exaggerated. I really like the design in the circle of 30. Maybe incorporate that in to the "o" Other font options would be nice. A bit more bohemian. Maybe the yoga and sup underlined with paddles. Perhaps symbols creating the lettering. I like your style though! thank you
Thanks for the feedback and liking #30.... which has the sun and water element. Will work on the typography and variants asap.
Question, i see that a fellow designer has placed imagery inside the letter O... was this your feedback to him / her or their original thought. If it was yours i can use it also, if not i cant as it is theirs.
My favorite of all of your designs is # 46. I would like to see the waves in the same manner that you have them but would like for "yoga and sup" to be right justified and the paddles removed.
81- not loving the mark in the "a" and would like to lighten up the font a bit. Also, can you change the font for Yoga and SUP? its important for SUP to be all capital letters since it is an acronym.
the design in the "o" is striking enough, I dont think it needs the contrast around the circle of black and white. The lines could be there, but maybe not the shading. You could maybe try a few other fonts. I want to simplify and i feel like ive seen this typewriter font quite a bit. These are so great tho. and I know ive been all across the board with my ideas, so thank you for trying to encompass all this.